Heya mama <3
"Nearly 75% of married couples had filed for divorce by the end of the week."
HA! I think you painted a rather realistic picture of the insanity that would ensue if everyone could suddenly hear everyone else's thoughts. I also like this righteous "thought police" that get salty at people for thinking negatively. I think if I was in this timeline, I would be one of those living in a cave xD
Can't wait to see the developments between Dan, and the hot chick from the 10th floor.
Lovely!
Shello
I really think the vast majority of people just totally couldn't handle it. I think I'd be able to live in a small community but also might choose the sea witch hut by the sea.
I honestly have no idea where it's going, so I'm pretty curious to see what happens too.
Thanks for reading, love.
No problem mama,
I have a soft spot for dynamic scenes, and I felt that you planted a great seed of chaos and suspense in my mind. Ocean is always nice! Now that you mention it, a dark cave would probably spook me out.
At least you have the most important part down, which is the writing. Sure it may not be the perfect manuscript at the first writing, but you are getting the words down on the page. You can always go back and play around with things at a later date c:
The pleasure is always mine~