The Island // FreeWrite Author Reading

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Hi There SteemVerse,

What do you get when @mariannewest and @d00k13 hatch a plan? A FreeWrite Author Reading on DTube :D. The two prompts used here are hungry and sunset.

The island was beautiful. The people were happy. They had challenges, they were hungry sometimes but it was nothing compared to the beauty of the island. They frolicked in the waves, walked on the sands, and they knew that some day, things would get better and they would hunger no more.

That day arrived with the MainLand Man. He looked around and liked what he saw. He wanted to call it home. With him, he brought some magic beans. He felt the island's soil was good for the magic beans and so shared it with some islanders. They had a taste and they liked it too.

Let's grow these together, he said. We could make this island abundant with Magic Beans. Then there would be no more hunger. They liked what they heard. They loved what they tasted.The islanders were intrigued. They nodded with excitement. They took beans and planted them.

As the beans started growing, MainLand Man realised that they needed to water the beans. They needed to bring in people from the mainland to help grow the beans. They needed to spend some time and effort so the beans will grow tall and proud. All the way up to the sky, he said.

Now, the Islanders had never had to grow anything. They got their rations from the Big Kahuna of the island and didn't have to do much for it. Some felt uneasy. They weren't comfortable being told what to do. They started resisting. MainLand Man got frustrated. The beans were already sprouting, and he knew they couldn't and mustn't stop now. Some islanders marched forward, while others stepped back.

Stop!!! some shouted. We don't like this!! Take your magic beans and leave! They felt there were other ways for abundance. They felt they had been on the Island far longer and knew of its potential. What could be done and what couldn't.

Give us more!! Tell us what to do begged the others. Excited to see what the Magic Beans could do for them. They continued to toil and work at it. Using the tools handed to them, taking advice on how to grow the Magic Beans.

The MainLand Man wasn't phased out. He continued planting, and watering, handing out the tools and tips, reaching out to those who were on his side. He knew that it was going to take longer but he didn't care. He was willing to wait until the Magic Beans reached the skies, and hoped all the Islanders will understand in time.

Every morning, the Islanders broke into their two different groups. They said things to each other, hoping to convince one another. Every evening the sunset would mark the end of another day, with the divide growing wider.

And while the Island continued to grow apart, the people on the Mainland chuckled. Happy with the unrest and waiting for when the time would be right, to walk onto the island and take the Magic Beans for themselves.

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This was a very good story :) Pointing out those that give freely even when being rejected. It expressed to me also how some people only see opportunity in things they do not have to put any effort in. If only they could all fore see the full potential of those "magic beans"; they would never be hungry again.
(How lucky your children are to have such a creative Mom. I am sure your creativity shines through in them) I loved it ♥

Awwww thank you so much @deepsouthpiddlin :D
Too kind....
Now, where's yours.... I hope you are working on the next one :)

At the airport going home right now. You are on a roll!!!

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Trying to move faster
I am taking too long
Will get the hang of it hopefully soon :D

Safe flight Marianne <3

And Mainland Man caused it all...

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The Islanders don't take part of the blame.. ;p

Beautiful article... :)

I was able to read what you have. I'll have to watch it with Dtube when I get home from work.

Great piece! Funny how people think 'nothing is for free' or they are afraid of it. Personally, I'd prefer a fully tummy over things.

I think it is change... people don't want to change ;p
Only their expectations, not so much their actions especially when it requires work :D
Thank you for coming by

Those magic beans must be some realllly good shit !

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I think yours is better ;p

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OMG another thing I could try ! So much going on 😬😬👀 great job love it and love the challange

You most definitely must try it
I think you will have fun
You can even use all the photos that you take for visuals :D

Happy and waiting for the time that they would be right.

Very deep and meaningful statement!

Awesome.

Hey @zekepickleman :)
thank you so much
Glad you liked it

I really think this concept of video freewrites work! I loved the affect of the images moving with the music and sound of your voice. I enjoyed listening in and I liked the story! Good job ;D

Thank you so much @crosheille
yay :D
So happy you liked it

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