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RE: Dtube Author Reading - Engulfed in Sonder (poetry)
Sounder to me is like an Inertia of musings, it's like someone experiencing a whole new reality inside their thoughts. I'm not sure if I'm totally correct really but lol I think I've once done a poem like that ponder to sonder
Specs of guts of dust,
look the /u:/ sound there and the rhythmic effect is definitely heavenly really Wow.
You painted vivid imageries of the regular rush hour of people and you know overseeing their everyday activities in a really picturesque pattern that drove home the beauty of this work. What a blast buddy wow. It's utterly beautiful
Yeah, to be honest when I'm in a really creative mind the way I see the world can be like an altered state of reality when I'm writing poetry. Usually it's a memory, like in this poem, but the recreation enters into different dimensions.
This poem was inspired by time I spent in London 🙂
Thanks for the feedback buddy 👍
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