I think that its great and that it doesn't really represent a tangible message at the same time.. i had to search in it to understand what it is about.. And too little white characters, difficoult too read with the bright red in contrast with black.. I would give it a big Title, rearrange the texts to give it a kind of order and change the background with something that gives a Hint on what you advertise, just from my point of view its a bit confusing, and still didn't really understand what you're offering in the beck end
Thank you so much! Where are you from?
im from italy, living in norway and you?
South Africa. Hey what do you think about my ad?
I think that its great and that it doesn't really represent a tangible message at the same time.. i had to search in it to understand what it is about.. And too little white characters, difficoult too read with the bright red in contrast with black.. I would give it a big Title, rearrange the texts to give it a kind of order and change the background with something that gives a Hint on what you advertise, just from my point of view its a bit confusing, and still didn't really understand what you're offering in the beck end
Thank you so much for this feedback, much appreciated! I hope you have a wonderful day!