Happy New Year Everybody!!! - Half Hour Songwrite Challenge - 12/31/18 - AN ALIEN SKY - A Flight of Fancy for @kaelci's Pick-a-Prompt: "They hid in her dreams and then tormented reality" - a Dtube Exclusive!

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Happy New Year! And welcome to HALF HOUR SONGWRITE CHALLENGE! 💛

Today's prompt comes from @kaelci, who entered it in yesterday's Pick-a-Prompt contest. Congratulations @kaelci and Happy New Year! 5 SBI coming your way :)

This was a cryptic prompt, challenging and also a lot of fun. Due to the time limit, I wasn't able to get as far as I'd have liked... I'm not at all happy with the melody for "An alien sky/And that's why", which was the last lyric added. But then again, that's the point of these Half Hour Songwrites, to come up with juicy little songbits that may or may not show promise, not with finished pieces. Who knows, maybe I'll tweak this one in an upcoming episode of TWEEKZ!

HALF HOUR SONGWRITE CHALLENGE is an ongoing daily Dtube vlog. Each day I challenge myself to write a song in 30 minutes, using a one word prompt provided by a random word generator (https://wordcounter.net/random-word-generator), by viewer suggestion through a "Pick-a-Prompt" contest, or by @mariannewest's daily freewrite on the Steem blockchain.

If you have a prompt that you'd like to see me try, enter it in the current "Pick-a-Prompt" contest (posted 5 days a week on my Steemit and Dtube blogs). If I use your prompt I will send you 5 SBI as a thank you!

On Sunday I'll be finishing one song from this week's Half Hour Songwrite Challenge, and posting the completed version. But on SATURDAY you, the viewers, get to decide which one! Saturday's video will feature numbered clips of each of the song fragments composed this week, and you get to vote for the one you'd most like to see made into a finished song. So be sure to tune in on Saturday and vote!

Today's prompt is: They hid in her dreams and then tormented reality

Lyrics:

She never wants to close her eyes
It's too much like dying
To wake from dreams of flying
And find herself grounded again
And all the pieces of her mind
That by day she cannot find
Play hide and seek
In her sleep
She prays the Lord
Her soul to keep

They say that truth is stranger than fiction
But she'll take candy from truth anyway
If only true things didn't hide
Behind dreams in her mind
And torment reality
'Til all that she can see
Is how far it is to fall
Fall
Fall
When you wake up in the cold
Cold
Cold
Tangled up in fear
Because your wings have disappeared
And all that's left to cling to
Is a world that isn't there

An alien sky
And that's why

She never wants to close her eyes...

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You pronounced "kaelci" right! :) I'm happy to have inspired you right off the bat :D And thank you so much for the SBI shares!

Tangled up in fear
Because your wings have disappeared
And all that's left to cling to
Is a world that isn't there

I love this bit!!!

Happy New Year! :D

:) yay! Glad I got your name right @kaelci. Thank you for the very surreal and whimsical prompt, that was so much fun!

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