I feel that the compass between the musical sounds produced with the piano and the sounds of the raindrops splashing in the produced wells are interrelated and are able to recreate a walk in the rain in a film semi penumbra set just to feel and not to see anything. The abrupt end induces to feel a cut of the film. I thought it was great. Well done!
I had a feeling of too-much-time in the moment that briefly eclipses the too-little-time feeling of too many days in the frenetic society of stress. Perhaps the jarring end can be taken as a metaphor for the all-too-briefness of the majority of our experiences of solace in the modern world. Thanks for listening, @zeleiracordero!
I capture your artistic intention and it's very accurate. The whole sound passage is relaxing and the abrupt end reflects the ephemeral moments of relaxation in our society so committed to frenetic movement and activities that should be harmonious, but have been transformed into a shake by the complications that have been added over the years. Then, peace is changed by stress, with or without intention.