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RE: Weaver, Unweaving the Harp

in #dsound6 years ago

@d-pend,

Daniel, beautifully done. Very well crafted.

An Ode to Learning ... A Ballad for the Brain ... one of my favorite subjects. It's not often that sulcus and gyrus make it into a poem. Brainwaves. Ideas planted as seeds over time become the harvest.

Sine-swell lushman of seasons grown,
of seedwell drawn, o'er seasons thrown.
Traveled, unraveling heart-torn gem—

be rung by fullness' hymn.

And these three lines ... delicious.

Daniel, you've gotten very good at writing Verse ... while managing to preserve that unique d-pend style and voice.

This is a huge accomplishment. A lot harder than most would imagine. Well done, mate.

Quill

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