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RE: Poetry Slam Contest [Week #13] - Light Blink
This is great. The poem flows with rhythm and style. I like the way you personify the poem and with within the first few lines mention, "I love my wife." She will definitely like this.
Ha! Who ever she is or where ever she maybe. no wife here. thanks right ladie, Im single! teehee! but thank you kindly for give such kind compliments about my piece!! i find it embarrassing to write and then record my stranger inner thoughts into poems that i do my best to let flow out of me. that is part of why i decided to jump into slam poetry contest, cause itf it seems scary, perhaps thats what i should be doing. ha! i am having fun! thank you again for listening and for your support! your words make me wanna keep going!
Yes. Keep it up. Awesome challenge!!
yes thanks! i absolutely will!