|| Poetry Slam Contest Week 10: "The Eidolon" ||

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Big thanks to @kryptoe for introducing me to this contest. I'm looking forward to participating and connecting with you all a bit more.

This week's theme, suadade (Portuguese), is a good one. This poem is about the longing to become real, the longing for love and being seen, the longing for innocence and the deep truth of being. It is a mixing of "hues" as it were between the Greek concept of the ethereal "eidolon" and the wonderful story of The Velveteen Rabbit.

I hope you enjoy it.

xx,
Kay

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I've been having computer problems and was unable to listen to this recent poem. But I was able to hear "Designed for Fighting". Dang! What a great way to do poetry. I have to tell you I love it. So much so that I am going to copy your process... if I can figure it out. Blessings.

I'm so glad you appreciated my approach and the poem, friend--but I do actually hope you won't copy!

I loved the ... what shall I call it? Kind of an etherial quality. That is what I found quite fascinating. That's what I'd like to do. Anyway, great work. Blessings.

Yeah: honestly, that's mostly just how gorgeous this music is! There is a bunch of this music and I've been listening to it a lot the last few days!

I'm certainly not the only one who has done that, but specifically with poems I haven't seen it. I did hear John's Gospel overlaid on gorgeous Byzantine hymns, however, a few years ago. That was stunning!

I can imagine. Draws me to it just thinking about it. Music and poetry were meant to merge. Thats what lyrics are after all. But to re-envision the use of music like you have is ... I think, profound. Blessings.

Loved it! And the softness of this pic.....💜

Thank you, dear!

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