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Sorry @breezin I am unable to hear this, will try the other link. (DSound)

Your IPFS link goes into an automatic download to hear the poem.

Yes I managed to enjoy your lovely poem, links just not working the way I expected.

I am glad that you could listen. Thank you for taking the time to try again, it was my first d-sound attempt - I hope it is not something I did wrong?

That was outstanding! Is this what being a mother is all about?

hey that's great!
It is about a woman, growing up, growing older, becoming a single mom, trying to ensure her daughter doesn't have the life that she had, then finding out she has cancer, at the end her daughter ends up carrying the burdens her mother left behind

Oh wow. After listening to it again. Even better.

haha, yest I struggled a bit holding back the tears towards the end. Thank you for the support

Hey! Thanks again for your submission. There are strict rules to be eligible for the contest, specifically the 2 minute. Nonetheless, your outstanding performance still made it on the list. Thank you!

Thank you so much @scuzzy - this is such an honor, I will be sure to adhere to the rules in the future!!

I am a bit confused about week two, will it be a poetry slam similar to the one that just passed, or will it be the last verse to father time rap song?

It will be similar to the one that just passed. Not a continuation of Father Time. Its just the theme was merely inspired by that song. Your own work would be your own interpretation of what 'Time' means to you. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me on Discord: 'scuzzy#7843'.

Ah, sorry bout that, the post was just a bit vague, and seeing that I already over-stepped boundaries regarding the previous rounds rules; I just want to get it right!

Wonderful reading!

hey @simgirl, so great to see you on my blog!!! Thank you for listening!

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This is awesome! :)

Thank you, how is that for venting....

Wow that's great,
You are look like very beautiful.
Your voice is very sweet.

Thank you so much!

That is a wonderful poem @breezin and you read it so well! Thanks for sharing!

Thank you for taking the time to listen! I appreciate your support!

"Oh fuck! HERE I GO AGAIN.." got me. Great poem, I loved your performance of it as well. Felt it! RESPECT

hahaha, I am glad that you liked it. RESPECT!

Not only are you beautiful and funny, but you're all around amazing 💞💞

AWWW, that is such an awesome compliment! Thank you ever so much!

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