A base & refined dream of mine
A base & refined dream of mine
original poetry & digital artI.
Striped marble bumbling its way,
Shearing through like a sandblast
Through phasic fancies arrives
At quantum uncertainty.
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A sort of unarrival:
Attenuated by regal dress,
Though insufficient to redeem
Its visceral, profane nature
Which the hedonistic bless.
II.
Leaving behind electromagnesis,
Mosquito particle cloud of pleasure,
Discovering strange elaborate formulae,
Pseudo-pyscho-historical dreambound treasure.
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Metaphors fail where prophetic eyes gleam,
Scientist-mystics and druid-engineers
Were gathered about the draft table of dream,
To study, discern, and joke 'round with their peers.
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With some slight chagrin found myself as their guest,
And I became subject at some soul's behest.
Tho gentle, insistent prognosis they claimed
'Til all my beast pride without fail had been maimed.
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So odd was the contrast 'tween this scene and the prior
When I woke contemplated myself, a great briar.
Poem & Art by
@d-pend
11/18/17
Art created byDigitally manipulating
Free domain images.
Intoxicating. Stephen Fry notes in a sketch from 'A bit of Fry and Laurie' his opinions on language. I hold the same passions, though would never quite so elequently express it, not for lack of trying mind you.
I feel sharing the above morsel validates my opinion to greater degree; and my opinion is that you've sold a portion of the treasure of language to allow for purchasing of your own acre of sacred space. Serenity. A brilliant garden in a small corner of paradise.
Honestly, this is just gorgeous.
So many edits. I apologize, the phone I have currently is terrible & I often make silly mistakes.
One of the most unique comments I've seen. I love your exuberant style of expression! Thank you @snakehayter.
Awww, you're making me blush! xP
Thank you, though.
In your words, it is a game of energy and cosmos. A free spirit of dreams with open eyes, this is your real potential that has reached the star of art my great friend @d-pend
Just Love It!!!
Thanks!!
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Very well said. Keep the good work up!
Thank you, and will do :D
Very very nice! 😊
Thank you!!