The bible tells women how to dress to please God: 1 Timothy 2:9, 10 (KJV)
9 In like manner also, that women adorn themselves in modest apparel, with shamefacedness and sobriety; not with broided hair, or gold, or pearls, or costly array;
10 But (which becometh women professing godliness) with good works.

If women would dress like this, the cruel glamour industry would starve to death. I like your drawing; it does make the point that if it's all about the clothes, the person inside is lost. Thanks!