My drawing of tesseract + edited materials

Hey guys, heres my drawing of tesseract - Infinity Stone, from marvel comics.
This is part of my experiment with new materials - pastels and + soft editing, so lets check it out.

the original work A.K.A @originalworks :)

and now look at edited one

how you think, which one is better and why? leave your oppinion in comments

Thanks for watching, hope you enjoyed