With those tags, it's almost as if you don't want to be read. Less with the complaining man, more with the brilliant writing.

I loved this - I could see you writing a novella and I'd buy it for sure. I was a Hemingway fan - his writing still makes me tingle. I love this stream of consciousness/circular way you have with tales when the muse takes you - truly, I loved reading this this morning and thanks so much for writing it.