DnW Poetry Contest #3: "So this is Goodbye" ✨

in #dnwpoetrycontest7 years ago (edited)

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T'was a sunny day when our eyes met
The smile in your face, I'll never forget.
As if the universe made the set,
Truly, meeting you was never a regret.

We were never lovers nor friends
My emotions grew just like the trends
Weird feelings, I can't comprehend
Then my heart utters "This is the end"

It's been years since the day we met
But there are things I didn't get
I knew there's something wrong, I fret
Time has abandoned me, now I regret.

I wish I could turn back the old time
To see your smile that continually shine.
But now you're gone, it's fine.
After all you've never been mine.


This poem was made possible because of ONE OK ROCK'S song entitled Heartache. (And yes after a year I was able to create a poem again.) Thank you for this opportunity, @kneelyrac and @deeday31 💟

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Thank you for reading!
-Dy

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Aww inspired by a song o talagang may pinaghuhugutan to? Or both?

Hahahahaha both? Hahaha

What happened to the persona's lover? Do they both have good lives now?

I believe they have a happy life now :)

Awww... That sounds bitter-sweet :(

Yes it is hehe but we'll never know. It is never too late hehe

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