My first serious Youtube Post!

A few months ago I made my first serious Youtube video and I Might only have a thousand views but I am still proud!

Looking for some advice to improve :)
One suggestions I received in the past was the audio, I have improved my audio in my latest content :)
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I look forward to the feedback :) Dont be too cruel ;)