This is a interesting essay with a fairly high level of sophistication, as you do a good job of explaining your concepts and applying them to the film. Your format is a good example of why it is important to indicate breaks in paragraphs. It is not exactly difficult to determine the transitions, but it certainly makes it easier to read when there is white space between paragraphs. Overall, your essay leaves me depressed! (That's good feedback). You take a perspective that highlights how sad Angela truly is, and leaves me wondering why she didn't attempt to build a relationship with someone in her own life/town. Some of the reasons are obvious, like the time she had to do so outside of caring for her family, but that isn't really an excuse either.