I read myself through the other chapters yesterday and admit that I liked the way you whetted my appetite with Ziper's confession in the end. You have the knack of delivering the atmosphere of the scenery and the entire world very accurately.

But your story makes very well sense even in this world. Who knows what organisations are in a current build-up to sow the seeds of distrust in people's good relationship with blockchains..

Very creative! I'll look at your next part too!