Hi,

Thanks for adding the sources, although your content is still 95% copypasta.

When you are using someone else's writing, you need to use markdown > before the start of the paragraph, so it can be clearly seen that it is quoted text. Then you need to write down the source under this quote (exact link to the page where text was found).

Also, Steemit values original content so it is recommended that the quotes should not cover more than 50% of the whole post and at least 50% of the content should be original.

Thanks,