I'm not sure I did such a great job at explaining the actual Streamity services - honestly it wasn't really meant to. I do these particular contests more for the writing experience - to expand the topics I write about. I think I can write better if I just pick a topic and write down whatever comes to mind, rather than researching a topic - seems to be more fluid and natural. (what do you think)
Plus it gets me off my usual politics rants... LOL...
The article wasn't bland and it had a touch of humor. It was a good introduction for Streamity but you are correct the article didn't actually explain the Streamity services therefore it could not stand alone. A "for example paragraph" might have helped but otherwise it was really good. Better luck on the next competition.
I'm not sure I did such a great job at explaining the actual Streamity services - honestly it wasn't really meant to. I do these particular contests more for the writing experience - to expand the topics I write about. I think I can write better if I just pick a topic and write down whatever comes to mind, rather than researching a topic - seems to be more fluid and natural. (what do you think)
Plus it gets me off my usual politics rants... LOL...
The article wasn't bland and it had a touch of humor. It was a good introduction for Streamity but you are correct the article didn't actually explain the Streamity services therefore it could not stand alone. A "for example paragraph" might have helped but otherwise it was really good. Better luck on the next competition.