Musical Lottery Week #1 - Original called "Where She'll Go"

in #cryptalent8 years ago

Original song called Where She'll Go

She came to tell me
Very Late
On a dog day afternoon
That she would be leaving me
And she'd hoped I understood

CHORUS

And where she'll go I don't know
But I wish that she had stayed
I miss her now and that's the truth
And I'll miss the plans we'd made

I wasn't shocked
I think I knew
After all we had been through
She made her point
No wasting time
And then she laid her cards down on the line

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Great tune!

Thanks for entering! Lovely song!

Thank you for hosting!

Catchy! Me likey! Bravo! Encore!

I appreciate you taking a listen!

Hello, Brimax!

I love your voice, cant wait for the next weeks lotery!

P.S. I Would like to jam with you!

Thanks for your kind comments. Will you be posting for this weeks lottery?

Good circular flow from the picking style verse to the driving chorus and back around.
'Reminiscent revealing' came into me mind on the 2nd listen. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you Brother......you know you gotta post something here this week !!!

You are most welcome Brother. I'm willing, it's the laptop that resists. I think it is too hot in the afternoon. Gotta start earlier in the day.
I'm glad you did this, I was unaware of this lottery. Thanks.

A pleasure my good man

Thank you Brother, will we see something here from you this week?

Sounds awesome man. Such a 60s feel and with lots of passion. Keep it rockin'!!!

Thank you Brother, you know I will.

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Yakuhi is also on it!

I will check it out, thank you.

Thank you Brother, always appreciate your input.

Good job. Upvoted. Cheers!!!!

Thank you Brother. You should post a song here in this contest, it appears I am the only one who had which I cannot believe.

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