Welcome to Steemit.com @visionlaunch here are a few tips:

1.) You will get more response if you provide Verification (IE - link here in your article to an offisite verification like a picture of you holding a Steemit sign on your official website)
2.) Include pictures and more detail in your post.
3.) Make sure you use proper tags (they can be include in your post using '#crowdfunding' with out the ''s) - those look good though!
4.) Write a longer post about yourself and post it in #introduceyourself and make sure to follow the steps above for maximum positive response!