Sarah comes over quite cool and I feel sorry for her that she doesn't realize that. But I hope that the story will continue and Mark will help her to realize that. I love your story! Great set up in the gallery.. with many people around and an awkward conversation. It feels somehow real. And I also like that Mark seems to be a gentleman.. let's see how his character will develop if you continue the story.

Your writing style is lovely - easy to read and very interesting.

Thank you for sharing and congratulations on the curie vote!