Second Creative Writing Challenge: Task #1: Tony's List | Can Love Change so much in only five years?: The dark side of the moon
A short story to help my brother.
I hope you could remember our anniversary and specially that you have learned how to express your feelings beyond a beautiful basket of fruits.
While I wait for you I’m wondering if you have chosen oranges instead of bananas, trying to be cuter and more polite than you were last year.
Today as soon as I woked up, I thought you’d tell me something about my hair and my lips as you used to do five years ago but I could only hear that awful claim about putting tomatoes in your scrambled eggs and asking louder: “… don´t forget to bring my favorite greek yogurt and a tasty bone for Charlie, our old Chihuahua”.
Sometimes I dream and can see us, having dinner as before, when we had not gotten married yet, hooking up our feelings through a few cups of white wine.
Tonight, surely, we'll drink some cokes while eating hot dogs.
I can’t believe how our lives have changed in five years.
Let's begin again or our love will be something like Gone with the wind
I like it, :)
Thanks, Hugs, Regards and congratulations.
It's creative your story.
I don't tell you "good luck". I tell you "many many successes for you"
Thank you, teacher.
As usual in my recent works, i prefer to talk about love and the sadness of a potencial break up as consequence of attention faults. I enjoy the experience of writing here, but I'm not sure to continue because I don´t have expedit access to internet. God only knows...
excellent friend, I liked it....
Thank you Edurley. I hope to meet you soon. I love your works specially your drawings. Hugs.