Sonnet: The Fleeing Damsel
Thanks @sammosk for this contest. Here is my entry.
"Oh Love! thou hath done to me this cruel pain
My fragile being: the whole, cut into shreds.
I tried evading its torture again
Drowning in painful tears; my eyes bleed red.
In abeyance, its throb came on knocking
Relish in its joy, it rocked off the wall.
Thy claws took the chunk of my soul, running
Watched blameless as thou vanished amidst all.
Love hath no love, but an obsequies vault.
He hath won thy heart, and thou punctured mine
Nay! I am strong! my flaws; true, will not fault
Solid, as a rock would remain my spine.
My love was genuine, i wished same for yours
Amiss hath my thoughts, as I'm left to sour."
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Oh my @gunneresq. What a beautiful display of creative genius!! I love it all! That is quite the intricate and well-laid out sonnet. The image really caught my attention, the b/w, contrast, layout, style, simplicity...just great!!! I'm upvoting and following you! Best of luck in this contest.
this is encouraging. i highly appreciate. all the best too
You're welcome and thank you for providing something worth really appreciating! <3
My pleasure
This is a Shakespearian sonnet i wrote. It is divided in two Stanzas
1st Stanza-8 Lines
2ne stanza- 6 Lines
With the rhyme scheme of ABABCDCD EFEFGG. Each line of the poem is structured in Ten syllables.
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