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RE: It's just a lost battle - Short story - Day 787: 5 Minute Freewrite
Wow! Beautiful prose and final lines/message. This: There is too much life retained in that door that closes today, too much life among those lights that today escape through the open window. A winter chill is freezing her soul. There will be no merry Christmas, only ice in the eyes, glasses of liquor and music to distract the sorrow.
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Woo hoo...I love that you like it!