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RE: A Dead Poems Society Production, Round 4, Contest and Community Building
Hello everyone! I hope it's not too late. I brought them a dead poem, I got lost the week before, on Sundays it's harder for me to be here. I hope you enjoy it. I'll comment again later. A hug!
"Attentive to the message of the earth
and the perfume of bittersweet stars
of wakefulness." Nice... I also like the musical theme, There is always some tune playing that pulls out the words from the ether when I write poetry, I feel more connected to the process of yours. =D
Great seeing you here. You already know how much I love your poetry. You never let me down.
I really like the phrase “discovery among other flavors the taste of life.” That is exactly how your poems make me feel.
Thank you for the love you give me, dearest @firststeps. I also love your beautiful self and your poetry.
Well, that was gorgeous, zeleira:)
Thanks for your appreciation, Pryde. It is so important to me, your opinion in this learning circle. I hug you with love!
These lines really spoke to me of swelling strains of a majestic orchestra of life:
(I commented on your original post too)
You're poem has left me thinking about the recurrence of the—apparently—ephemeral (the myth of eternal return). It's a paradox; you need to finish so you can start over, you need to die so you can be born again—and out of the same matter of all. New orders have been established once and over again since the beginning of history—and before. It's a mirroring reality. It’s a metaphor. Metaphysical and fascinating, @zeleiracordero. Loved it. ♥
Thank you very much, my dear friend!
Que hermoso... Transmite la esperanza de un renacer, de resurgir, de levantarse... Y solo cuando caemos, sentimos la fuerza que nos empuja a seguir adelante.
Mis respetos @zeleiracordero y lluvia de bendiciones para ti¡
¡Awww... Gracias, poeta!