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RE: The Philosopher's Heart - Finish the Fiction #19
Great entry marcoriccardi. I love the way you get deep inside the mind of the narrator placing us as readers firmly inside his/her head.
There was something that bound us, I know. I see these subtle, yellow things... the colors... the solid feeling under... fingers... I have fingers... another ancient word resurfaced.
It is interesting how you have tried to describe someone between forms, lost in incorporate body-less mess, yet as I said above we are their in the mind of this person. Great stuff :-)
I put some effort in thinking about how the "facelss child" could write in a page of diary, thank you for your appreciation!