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RE: LER/ The visitor - fiction story
I love the pace of the action near to the end. Especially in contrast to the build up which is slower and more atmospheric. I nearly went in a similar direction myself as my first thoughts with the prompt was around Satan inhabiting the form of the cult leader or something like that and then I went away to make a coffee and when I got back to the keyboard it had all changed in my mind lol. Great finale to the story @marcoriccardi :-)
Thank you! Your finale is still my favorite yet ;)
It's a good thing to change direction...getting stuck to the first idea sometimes lead to a forced story