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RE: The Bully: PowerHouseCreatives Contest
I really love this story Jayna! It is an excellent piece of fiction.
The dialogue particularly is realistic and economical in word usage and choice. The overall story shows wonderful characterization and there is a message about the nature of bullying I think.
Swank though... what an ass-hat. Seriously you had my fists clenching wanting to give him a taste of his own medicine. It's probably good that I didn't go to that school lol
Thank you, @raj808! If I got someone to clench their fists, that is a compliment indeed. Thanks so much for reading my story. I’m glad you liked it.