Stach short story

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

Ann had suffered at her last foster home, her foster mother had been a frustrated drunk but managed to hide this from the social services who of course didn't really care.

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Ann usually got locked in for days whenever she upset her foster mother. She also made Ann do all sorts of strenuous house chores leaving little or no time for her to rest or do school work.
Ann often wondered what it would cost to be free, money? sex? violence? good education? she held on to freedom thoughts for years, imagining how and what it would be like to live free from oppression.

It finally happened on a bright Friday afternoon, what had seemed impossible became possible. Her parents had come looking for her, they were ready to fight and get custody again. Ann's heart leaped, she could finally live free...

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This Is a nice read and I like the way you created suspense by ending it abruptly to engage the reader in such a way that the following part becomes anticipated.... Well done!

Thank you 😁😁

Very well put together

Thanks 👍👍

What a nice write up.it's motivating .keep it up.

Thank you ☺☺

Thank you ☺

My dear friend, i say to you, you are really good. I sincerely want to take a peek into that head of yours. Chai. Freedom! That's the word. That's what we all seek for.

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