Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #21

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

This is my entrance I hope, that everyone likes it.
The Border
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"Those Those came out, completely different from the coaches' illusions", The moment arrived; everything I had imagined, the powers of the those were totally different, exceeded their expectations and for what they were trained; At that time they had to demonstrate what they were made of and accomplish, defend their race or what is left of their ecosystem, their purpose is not to be exterminated.

And the noise that frightened him so much, was little for what was coming, they were teleporting from one place to another, since they were improved from 2500 light years, in the future; they could acquire the form and defend themselves with the weapons that they wanted, taking a pointed form from one of their extremities, introducing directly on the forehead, of one of their companions, and at the same time a race, so intelligent and of another type of technology; he could read his mind and detect which were the most important checkpoints and where his best weapons were; but the main thing the "VECTRUM", an artifact called a super-powerful molecule reactor that could not fall into the hands of the enemy, studied the area completely, simply traveling through the thoughts of the brain of its already dead comrade. oh what was left of him !, when suddenly he is surprised by his battle partner who witnessed such a sinister deed and in the middle of the shock shoots his weapon releasing his limb and disconnecting from the body of his already dead comrade, he immediately reacts and decides run and sound the alarm, to warn of an imminent attack; Immediately, the those goes in search of their main objective to search, an artifact called "VECTRUM", but could not have its location because it was interrupted.

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Once the whole area has been alerted, it is tele-transported again, thus its area of ​​technological weapons to destroy them, activating a powerful bomb to finish them off. and to leave without ammunition supply, its way of attacking is tactical and focused; his purpose is to find the "VECTRUM", so that his race dominates everything and is invincible and enslave every tribe, colony and race that exists. they want to devour everything that is in their way with this new species that they developed in the future, apparently they will come to an end !.

With all the learning and skills he learned and developed, but more his faith in fighting was the only thing that would keep him alive and his people, he decided to go after the enemy and face him so he had no chance, his honor and for what he had been trained , he put it as a standard banner on his chest, when he arrives at the area where he sheltered himself, the "VECTRUM", transcendental piece in all this; a strong explosion occurs, and in that moment everything that protected the "VECTRUM" and the soldier is deactivated, he decides to take it with his hands without knowing that it could cause him and absorbed all the powers and benefits that he brought with him.

That moment a flash of fluorescent green light in his chest, takes control of him and learns that his power is the one hundred soldiers together and could be teleported, decided to go to the future and finish with those who designed and created such destructive hybrids and that in the present; everything followed its normal course. rather than fight at that moment decided to end with everything root and principle. destroying them all with this strategy that went beyond their own understanding.

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friend, I do not understand this mechanism

I usually just scroll through and press the vote buton, but this was a good read. Thanks for not wasting my time!

thank you, friend, I appreciate your comment

First of all: you made the Those coming from the future, and I love time paradox and time travel stories!

Second thought: I would read your story in Spanish, because I believe the translation doesn't give full justice to it!

Bravo!

friend, thank you for your constructive criticism, it is a pleasure for me to participate and provide an excellent reading, where my mind travels, to transfer them and submerge them in the stories I develop.

Thank you for joining once more the contest, with your story ending of future time-travelling predator species, incredibly powerful artifacts and supreme sacrifice!

It is a pleasure for me to participate, and thanks to you for such a wonderful contest.

Greetings, brave storyteller!
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