Two Long Legs #a limerick contest

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

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TWO LONG LEGS

He saw a form there in the dark:

Two long legs so spicy and stark

His mouth watered; his jaws fell

And no it was no damsel

But fried chicken limbs with a mark

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Thank you for reading

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Nice one bro .....

@olanrewaju, I love it. Perhaps it's a typo, but your 5th line doesn't rhyme with lines 1 & 2. There is still time to check and edit it. Thanks,
@Lymmerik

Adjustment has been done @lymmerik
I hope you like this one

"But fried chicken limbs with a mark"

@olanrewaju,
excellent. Good luck my friend! We'll see in a few days who the winners are!
have a great day!
@Lymmerik

Exactly Mr friend @lymmerik
Thanks for coming around

you are so welcome. I'm glad to be here
@Lymmerik

I don't seem to get the lyrics here. Pls clear me

A limerick is a form of poetry in five-line, predominantly anapestic meter with a strict rhyme scheme, often humorous and sometimes obscene. The third and fourth lines are shorter than the other three. Wikipedia

This is creative of you. It would have been better if you can add more lines

All the best dear... Win and bring the molla home... Hehehe VP is low at the moment...😊

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