@aerick, I think that you did a fine job with the writing of this contest entry. However, you may want to add some additional paragraphs giving the information asked for in point 2 of the contest rules below:

1. Write a short essay in an original post on your blog telling me who needs help. Who needs food. Who needs medicine. Who needs help, right now. Anyone, anywhere in the world. Post a link to your essay in the comment section of this post!
2. The winning candidate proposed by the essay will be sent 100 SBD for this need.

You can't possibly help Everyone with 100 SBD, so you need to select one specific group or individual, describe their situation and why they need the help, and what you would do with the prize to help them.

be human and you will see that many people need help and you may be the help they have been praying for.

This is a really great summary of the article. I love how you have worded it.

I've upvoted and resteemed this article as one of my daily post promotions for the @mitneb Curation Trail Project. It will be featured in the @mitneb Curation Trail Project Daily Report for 18 JAN 2018.

Cheers!