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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #16
Thank you @dirge for the awesome, and really disturbing, start of the story!
This week I'm the first to post!
Here's the birth of my sick mind:
https://steemit.com/contest/@marcoriccardi/ler-the-visitor-fiction-story
It was a fun script right Marco? Well done for being the first.. shoot it out like a shotgun hit on a zombie head.
I don’t think I’d like that new world, but you did a great job describing how it began. I want to read more!
I wanted to include Ellisa's training as being something that happened to her automatically, but I couldn't find the way in which I wanted to do it.