El poder de los sentimientos, SteemFantasy Contest#2/The power of the feelings, SteemFantasy Contest#2

in #contest6 years ago (edited)

Tal como querías @bluemist me he dejado llevar y he intentado transmitir la sensación del pensamiento que me vino al escuchar la BSO de la película The Dark Knight Rises.


He optado por realizar mi presentación en dos idiomas, inglés y español.


As requested by @bluemist i wrote the following lines after listened the The Dark Knight Rises.



My option for this contest was to try to write in both languages, english and spanish.



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La desesperación del ser.


Cuando te sientes impotente.


No puedes solucionar lo que pasó.


Entras en una espiral de malos pensamientos, sensaciones que te hacen desesperar y eres
capaz de cometer un acto incomprensible.


Entonces recuerdas a los tuyos, empiezas a pensar en todos los que sufrirán tus
consecuencias y comienzas a sentir que tienes que luchar para superarte y conseguir tus
objetivos.


Piensas en como te ve tú hija, te mira con ojos puros, te admira, te ve fuerte y capaz de
todo.


Eso te hace más fuerte y te inunda la sensación de que superados estos problemas ella
seguirá mirándote así.


Eres su tronco y quieres que siempre sepa que le darás cobijo.


No puedes defraudarla, ella tiene que saber que siempre te tendrá para ayudarla.


Eres fuerte y lo sabes.


Entonces sabes que sólo puedes hacer una cosa.


Luchas con todas tus fuerzas por llegar al camino que finaliza en tú meta.


La subjetividad te hace emocionarte y ser capaz de tener un valor en ti que jamás podrías
haber imaginado.


Empiezas a sentirte poderoso.


Tú mente empieza a crear ideas y buscar atajos creativos, te preparas para ser el mejor, no
te conformas con lo mediocre.


Eres capaz de llegar y lo sabes.


La inmensa satisfacción de lo logrado ya no sólo para ti, para aquellos a los que quieres.


Te hacen ser invencible!

The desperation of the being.


When you feel helpless.


You can't fix what happened.


You fall into a bad thoughts spiral, feelings that despair you and push you to commit
uncomprehensible acts.


Then you remember your relatives, you start thinking about everyone that would suffer the
consecuences and you start feeling that you have to fight to be better than that and fight to
reach your objectives.


You think how your daughter looks at you, her pure gaze on you, admiring you, recognizing
the strenght in you, an image of you being able to achieve the greatest things.


That makes you stronger, and floods you with a feeling that once every problem is solved
she will remain looking at you like that, you are her solid ground and you want her to know
that you will always be her shelter.


You can't let her down, she has to know that she will always have you by her side to help
her.


You are strong and you know it.


So there is only one thing you can do.


You fight with all your strenght to reach your goal.


The subjectivity gets you excited and makes you capable to find so much courage in you
that you could ever imagine.


You start feeling powerful.


Your mind starts racing and creating ideas and finding creative shortcuts, you prepare
yourself to be the best, and you won't settle with what's mediocre.


You are fully capable of reaching your goal and you know it.


The great satisfaction of what has been achieved is not only yours to enjoy, but also the
people you love.


They make you invensible.

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Espero os guste !

I hope you liked it



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Hello @garvi, thank you for sharing this creative work! We just stopped by to say that you've been upvoted by the @creativecrypto magazine. The Creative Crypto is all about art on the blockchain and learning from creatives like you. Looking forward to crossing paths again soon. Steem on!

Your elaboration of feeling was quite strong and inspirational

Thank you so much for participating in this contest, i'll soon announce the theme of next contest along with winner of this one.

Thank you so much @bluemist . It has been a pleasure to participate in your contest :)

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