This was a great story. Even though it's short, @felt.buzz really captured the feel of the characters involved in the dialogue with comical/somewhat quirky personalities. I loved the whole vibe and the "no need for language like that" and then the last sentence. Perfection!

It almost had a feel of the show that I love called "Mrs. Brown's Boys" that is just such a realistic fun comedy. :)
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@felt.buzz/what-are-you-gawping-at-a-five-minute-freewrite-big-bird-31#@eroticabian/re-feltbuzz-what-are-you-gawping-at-a-five-minute-freewrite-big-bird-31-20180610t225846459z