DAY 65 - SIXTY FIVE " The Boogeyman "

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He appears in your dreams
Rummages through
Slips into your sleep
Feeds on your fears
And leaves you in tears

Dark matter surround him
Eroding us, creating weaklings
Out of our feeble minds

Slipping slowly into the soul
Mesmerizing us in total darkness
Eating up our wits
Beaded sweat gracing our cheeks
Dragging our wits, soul and minds
Into oblivion
Unleashing torrents of nightmares

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This is grimly captivating...

Thank you bro for reading and you frequent visits really appreciate it

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In my town we do not know who he is, The Boogeyman. It looks scary.

The bogeyman, the harbinger of fear

I read this and smiled... It feels I could imagine what u imagined to write this

Yes bro you sure can

It's really a brilliant poem, I love the fact that you used some fine imageries on this one the first stanza had some alliteration, the repetition of consonant sounds in nearly three lines of the stanza, that's total mastery really, in fact I saw that you quite used them as well in the last stanza, and I can't help but wonder, it's beautiful
Howver I saw that you started writing in first person but not till the end us it deliberate?

Once again it's beautiful

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