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RE: Beta reading contest Ragnarok Conspiracy : Part one. 8 Prices of $1.5 SBD and one of $10 SBD
Chapter 1 reviewed. Realizing how long my commentary/feedback is I'm probably going to have to split it so it doesn't end up as a full wall of text.
Thank you for helping out. You seem to be a real editor type. Me I was just trying to help with what I could. I hope you continue to help @pibara out, I have been enjoying the story, and with your help maybe more will.