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RE: Contest! Win 2 SBD, Free Upvotes, and More for Writing 17 Syllables
Old habits die hard.
now i think while i am cooking.
Black coffee,No cream.
That'sit.
Old habits die hard.
now i think while i am cooking.
Black coffee,No cream.
That'sit.
Thank you for your entry! For this contest, you need to write a traditional haiku -- 5-7-5, like the ones on this page: http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm
I think he did - I think the final line is a comment, not part of the haiku.
But that's just my take.
Yea I guess I shouldn't be so much of a stickler...
@dildil7401 when I judge I'll remove the "now" from the beginning of the second line so it has 7 syllables.
Oops - missed that. Sounds good.
And actually, when it comes to haiku, I'm pretty much a stickler myself. I love the traditional form.
Rules be rules, nome sane?
Indeed!