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RE: Ragnarǫk - Finish the Story 20
This line caught my attention reminding me of the carnage on the battlefield:
"Halt!" several officers echoed in unison, while the phalanxes slid over the guts of enemies and comrades.
And then:
"Several soldiers fell to their knees in the bloody sewage"
Really painted a picture for me there. Yikes!
Thank you! My goal was to transmit to the reader the sense of a huge and useless carnage