The eyes of the water insomniac
they blink again
in the light of a new ray.
Well achieved and beautiful this image.
We are responsible for our lives. What we do in it, good or bad, will return again and again. The shore is not abandoned, there will be collected what we sow.
I can't decide if this poem is a direct indictment of people who litter the oceans, or an indirect accusation of people who litter other people's lives with nonsense. Either way, the imagery is strong.
Well achieved and beautiful this image.
We are responsible for our lives. What we do in it, good or bad, will return again and again. The shore is not abandoned, there will be collected what we sow.
I can't decide if this poem is a direct indictment of people who litter the oceans, or an indirect accusation of people who litter other people's lives with nonsense. Either way, the imagery is strong.
Yes, it is a claim to love our oceans. It is easier not to throw garbage than to pick it up. .
To me the ocean is alive and speaks of oneness. Even in the darkness, it cradles and watches. Loved this piece:0
My dream is to leave a healthy sea for our generations,
That is an excellent dream. for sure:)
Terrific imagery. Your poem almost makes the sea seem sentient.
Yes, the sea is the largest being on the planet alive. You need our help