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RE: The Philosopher's Heart - Finish the Fiction #19
This is beautiful Marco! Your switch of perspective, their thirsts, and all of the details in the exchange (love how you focused on the fingers and yellowing) kept me reading on (thirsting for more).
Thank you Brisby! I wanted to show a good side in the entity beyond the portal... and to give a sense of sacrifice to the search done by the old man :)