DOCUMENTZ -SEASON ONE EPISODE 1 PROMPT.

in #contest7 years ago

Before i start scribbling down my scary zombie story, i would love to say a word of appreciation to @writersedge and @zakludick for putting this contest up and creating a platform for a free mind writing, i appreciate you both. Below is the link to the Season 1 Episode 1 prompt, you can follow it to know what happened to "Tim".

https://steemit.com/contest/@writers-edge/documentz-season-1-episode-1-prompt

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On seeing every event that occurred and how the lady was being bitten down on the shoulder by the man. Tim realised that there was a mysterious infection in the city of "Denver"and wondered what could be wrong, "how can a living human tear into another like that" he muttered with disgust, guess he was surprised at the scenario since it was unusual, this is not cool" he murmured, “i need to get the hell out of here”.

Rumbling through his head were unimaginable stuffs "what if i get bitten that way" "what if i don't make it out of here alive" what if i don't ever get to see her again" but of course he had to shake off the thoughts and think of a way out,suddenly his thoughts swayed away when he spinned and saw the driver that had picked him few minutes ago from the airport, lying helplessly and face bent on the car steering, he felt bad and upset on how he could not even save his life or at least be of a little help.

Calculating the distance between him and the creature that was moving closer, he figured he was not quite far from it anymore, looking out for where to hide and thinking fast for a strategy to escaped. He rushed to the car trunk to save his bag, inside the trunk were bottles of beer which the driver must have consumed, fire extinguisher and car spanner, quickly he grabbed out 2 bottles, placing them on his tummy along his bag and soothingly looking for a comfortable place to hide.

By his right, were a huge crowd of people running helter skelter and calling for help that never seemed to arrive, on his left was a little girl,standing still and wailing, calling out "mummy" that was devoured few hours ago, he thought of saving the child, immediately he dashed out to pick up the child but was stopped by a fast moving vehicle that had lost control, and crushed her before he could get to her.

At that moment, “Tim”had been frustrated, still questioning what was going on, " i need to get to lakewood now", i've got to see her" he said, moving quickly to the main road and praying if only he could find a vehicle, luckily for him, he found an empty vehicle that was still ignited, he moved towards it, tossed his bag and the bottles into the front seat and slipped into the driver's seat with no inspection of the back seat, not realising that there was another devouring the flesh out of the previous car driver in the back seat. Quickly he moved the car from were it was and started driving,following the road heading towards "Lakewood", miles out of the infested area, Tim faced his nightmare.

First he heard a squeak,which he didn't bother to turn, then a loud growl, the life almost jumped out of his soul when he saw the imaginable creature looking directly into his eyeballs without fear as he turned, pale skin like it has been underneath water for ages, scary eyes, unkempt hair and blood dripping from its mouth, it stretched forth its hands to give “Tim” an unfriendly hug, ofcourse he had to flee, but the car was in motion.

They struggled for about an hour, but Tim was not that lucky, his index finger was bitten by the “Zombie”, but on looking down he found a car spanner lying beside his bag which the previous driver must have left after doing some car repairs and the bottles he tossed in, at that moment, life was gushing out of him because of pains from the finger, he had to act fast, using the spanner, he plucked out the zombies right eye, and was now set for the other, but noticed there was no expression showing feeling of pain by the creature,at that his heart hardened and he set out for the other eye with force,he plunged into the eye sockets with strength, spinning the spanner to break every item but it was still alive, quickly he managed to pull over, snatched one of the empty beer bottles and crashed it on the creatures head, surprisingly it was still alive, he became frustrated and screamed "i swear am going to kill you, you blood sucker" while driving the remains of the broken bottle into its heart, gently the creature fell on the back car seat, he was perplexed that the last blow had killed it and was now conscious of where to hit when he encounters another.

Remembering his index finger and realising that he must have been infected with the virus and its likely to spread....with his little knowledge of medicine which he had gathered from his grandfather and father concurrently that were doctors, he knew he had to take off the finger, looking around for the next available makeshift item to use, he fixed his eye on an old knife, snatched it from the ground n set out to cut off his index finger, the pain was excruciating but he had to do it anyway.

After the process, he set out to continue his journey to Lakewood.."i have to see her" i have to see her" he kept saying these words.

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Very nice @aideedavis. I like the finger removal... Nice way of showing how desperate the situation is.

Thank you @demonsthenes, just my attempt, i hope i meet up with the race.🙈

Good job bringing across the urgency and lots of action in a short span :)

Thank you @jmcrouse, am glad you liked it.

She's consistent, determine, patient, good at words, creative and Unique in her post delivery.
Seriously eh, me I don't like vampire and zombie movies had to read through and stop somewhere before it captures my imagination.
@aideedavies, from my heart, i am happy you are succeeding and glad you took every word I spoken to you about seriously. Recall when we first meet and she was like Peter what do I need to know bla bla.
😃😀😃....gifted hands @aideedavies

Ooooh dear....😃😃😃 tnks alot..i soo much appreciate this. U've been an inspiration to me.

Great story, thankGod it's a fiction, cos I didn't like that part we're that child was crushed by the moving vehicle. Interesting dear, Steemon! @aideedavies

Yeaaa..its fiction, and i wouldn't love to see a child die in that manner...thanks for de encouragement.

Its obvious you watch a lot of zombie move. You nailed this story. Cant wait for the next episode.

Thank you @mrxplicit next episode will be out soon...

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