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RE: Drack - Constrained Writing Contest #24

in #constrainedwriting7 years ago

I enjoyed reading your story.

I like how the inner friendliness of the kids came out, how a little encouragement led them to be accepting, even living little creatures.

And it’s a good reminder to not “get your kids in trouble” if the tell in themselves. It’s too much of a positive when kids talk to you about their problems to get it taken away by giving silly consequences.

Thanks for joining the writing contest ❤️❤️

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Thank you. We should never underestimate how children see the world very differently.

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