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RE: Story of a Pathetic Friend -- "Little Did She Know" #constrainedwriting #12

in #constrainedwriting • 7 years ago

I really like the message your story conveys. One thing to watch out for is your tenses. Your story is predominantly past tense, but there are some times when you switch to present tense.

I'm so glad you entered the contest!

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks for the positive criticism. I very much welcome and appreciate it. I am happy I came across Steemit and Steemian like you, to help me sharpen my English skills, as English is not my mother tongue. :)

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    If you ever have questions, you can send me a message on steemit chat @foragingquietude. I would be more than happy to help.

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       7 years ago 

      thanks v. much.

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