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RE: constrainedwriting #18 The Story of Oi
This story was enthralling in a way old folk ones are and while the concept is easy: do wrong, get punished, learn a lesson, writing something that encompasses a world of its own is not.
I love that you chose an African pantheon which is mostly forgotten and almost never mentined. The details like the healing plant are awesome - it's that extra step that pulls you really in.
Thank you for your entry!
Thank you. I wrote more (I often get carried away) but slimmdd it down as I'm aware many people skim-read on posts and i wanted to draw in not drag out 😊.. i did a little research on African deity/spirits and away we go. So glad you like it.