Wow!
You dare to go out on a limb with your writing, and it works. Love this:
And it hits you, hard and sharp, and the wind is no longer a song, but a booming, rattling thing, a breaking thing, and you can't see anything in the too fast too fast too fast dance outside, and you want to turn away, but you can't let yourself, because somehow, and nobody told you, but you know...