Haiku Saturday, Round 10, Contest and Community Building, by @prydefoltzoscarina (58)in #concurso • 6 years ago (edited) fuente SADNESS Like those leaves of a sad tree, my tears keep falling for a lost and distant love... TRISTEZA Como hojas de ese árbol caen lágrimas por un amor lejano... @oscarina Si deseas participar de esta iniciativa de @prydefoltz consulta acá separador #poetry #haikusaturday #literatura #haiku
Interesting 7/5/7 structure! I loved the unity with nature here... How often it feels that the nature has empathy for our ups and downs. Thank you for this piece!
This was really beautiful. Lovely:)
Only time heals sadness. Like the fallen leaves, they follow their course.
Very good composition that immerses us in the feeling of melancholy for a loss, for missing a presence. Good job, @oscarina.
Personal sadness and love connected to nature. Nice, @oscarina ♥
(Coming back to upvote in two days) ☻
@oscarina you were flagged by a worthless gang of trolls, so, I gave you an upvote to counteract it! Enjoy!!