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RE: Writers competition. This episode: I just found out about this and had to write something for it.
Hair raising finish there!!!
Really thought that crazy old guy was going to have some kingly lunch. :)
Thanks for sharing<3
Thank you for your comments @sammosk. I've taken some time to rearrange some parts, I think it reads smoother now with greater clarity.
H. G.